Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Come let's cry


O’ little boy,
Come to me
With your story
With your dreams
With those moments
 When You cried for them
And those hopes
You had till the end.

O’ pretty girl
Come to me
With those promises
That made you dream
With those tears
That rolled down the eyes
With those smiles
That flew to the sky.
O’ vexed lady
Come to me
With that kid
Who died afore dawn
With your man
Who did not care
And with the other lady
That you can’t bare

O’ strained man
Come to me
With all problems
Even if they are bleak
With those worries
That made you weak
And that woe
Which world can’t see

O’ everybody
Come to me
Neither in a hope
Of making things fine
Nor with a wish
Of being gratified
Come for the thing
Which no one desires
Let’s get together
Come let’s cry.

7 comments:

  1. Hi Bhatt Aquib,

    Came across your writings a while ago. :)
    Loved your poems, especially this one!

    Its always a great feeling to hold on to someone and cry out our woes; but mostly the thing is that, its hard to find someone who'd hear... Great write my friend!
    Keep writing... Looking forward for your next post! :)


    Sincerely,
    Hanan

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  2. Yeah! Rightly said, its quite hard to find someone who would listen to your woes. Thanks for the appreciation. Next post will roll out soon. :)

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  3. I love how the words flow in this poem, and how you've described each person, (woman, child, man) and their own little woes. Finding the right person that will listen to our woes, then cry with us isn't easy.

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    1. You don't need to find a person actually; it just it selves comes your way. :)

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  5. Bhatt,

    I was just fyi'ed about you and your writings. Your poetry moves my soul.

    "Come to me
    With all problems
    Even if they are bleak"

    No problem big or small love it..

    I would love to feature you as a poet on our site... If you get the chance please stop by and have a look see to see if you would be interested in being showcased.

    Jessica

    BlogNostics Co Founder

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